Monday, August 10, 2009

IF:Impatience

Hi guys,

In the garden of Eden,
Came a mysterious moment
When the crawler seduced
And broke the first woman's persistence.

Chained as she was,
In Will and honour
Her visions were free
and could not be rooted to any corner.

The Red fruit swirled in her mind
Like the taste of dripping honey,
She craved for one bite
And wanted it blindly.

Unfortunately she did not know
That she was crossing the fence
Unfortunately she did not know
What will be the result of her IMPATIENCE!

Enjoy!

Cheers.
Deb.

7 comments:

  1. Hey, I really like your composition. nicely done :)

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  2. More curiosity than impatience actually...

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  4. Great post. I think one of the basic things that we should know know is that we must always make sure that you are safe in every transactions you wanted to indulge with.

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  5. Thanks for sharing such an interesting post with us. You have made some valuable points which are very useful for all readers

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